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Alone by ~RebelOfZion:iconRebelOfZion:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Alone
Alone I sit,
On my bed
So cold
So lonely
Unfitting of "friends"
Why do I do this to myself?
Why is this done to me?
Alone
Sitting on my bed
Phone in hand waiting for it to ring
"Friends"?
Who needs them?
I feel so alone without them
Alone
Pick up the phone
Dial my number
CALL ME
Suicide sounds good right now
Don't know why
Attention whore maybe?
So alone
Co-workers
probation officer?
Girlfriend?
Someone please call
I am so alone
False friends surround me
Laughing at jokes untold
Attention whore?
Yes, yes I am
©2004-2009 ~RebelOfZion
:iconrebelofzion:

Author's Comments

This is a description of how I feel lately.

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:iconspookydoll:
~SpookyDoll Apr 20, 2004, 12:07:39 AM
Hey! I feel that way too! Yep. Really....

--
:fusionrock:
You don't need a weather man
To know which way the wind blows
:iconrebelofzion:
~RebelOfZion Apr 20, 2004, 12:09:49 AM
I know, I feel like that all of the time though.
I know it is normal, but through some things that have happened recently, it feels even worse. By the way, Dave says hi.

--
Nope.
:iconspookydoll:
~SpookyDoll Apr 20, 2004, 12:43:17 AM
Sorry to hear that! I would say I hope you are doing okay, but then to that you would say "DUH!" I just hope that whatever you are goin through isn't too much for you. And this :hug:

--
:fusionrock:
You don't need a weather man
To know which way the wind blows
:iconnuclearfallout:
~nuclearfallout Apr 20, 2004, 3:21:29 AM
Go out and kick some puppies, you'll feel better.
I dunno, I'm bad at the advice thing. I do hope these feelings of yours go away because dammit, they're just no good to have. :teddy:

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JACK WHITE STOLE MY PEPPERMINTS!
:icondarke-reflection:
~darke-reflection Apr 20, 2004, 3:40:56 AM
well tyler, you're not alone, even if you may feel that way sometimes, you have friends that do care.

--
"I realize that, historically, phrases like 'massive redistribution of wealth' are usually accompanied by rivers of blood. That said, it's about time for a massive redistribution of wealth."
:icongrungeguitarist:
~grungeguitarist Apr 20, 2004, 7:21:34 PM
I have some constructive criticism if you'd like. Send me a note if it's cool with you.

--
"Dude I didn't know it was Haloween until I saw the stoplight walk past me!"
-Pat

"I MAKE LOVE LIKE A FUCKING STREET FIGHER VIDEOGAME I GOT SPECIAL MOOOOOVES AND SHIT!!!"
-Shane Koyzcans
:iconjferson:
~jferson Apr 20, 2004, 8:45:04 PM
i know that feels man, and well I don't have your number.
:icondemos:
~demos Apr 20, 2004, 10:28:08 PM
I called you last friday to have you hang out. Your mom sounds really tired at like 1 in the morning, she said you werent there, so I dropped it and didnt ask. Sorry I have been stupid and neglectful of you buddy. Dont worry, I still <3 you, okay? I'm sorry I made you feel lonely. I know how it feels, and wish to not put that burden on you any longer.
:iconhereditarynarcissism:
~hereditarynarcissism Apr 21, 2004, 4:49:33 AM
i love this piece. its so real. i feel like that alot. especially when i want to talk to someone and i ring everyone, but noones home.

please have a look at my site, i look so lame with no page views
ta.
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